Under The Skin Ending Notes

 

Cinematography

  • long shot of her hiding makes her appear small and vulnerable
  • desaturated/lack of colour when she looks up which is similar to the beginning of  the movie when it shows parts of Scotland. (The beginning bit also lacks colour but it’s not comprehensible)
  • We see Laura from behind which is how the log man would be seeing her
  • The camera is from her point of view when she wakes up (?)
  • Camera shifts – we see what she looks like/what he see’s/she’s alien again
  • Camera tilts up to the sky – heaven/death/a better place

 

Mise en Scene

  • Sleeping in the tree’s shot – free/at peace/nature is big/nature plays a role/nature is powerful/she is connected with nature – both Laura and nature are unpredictable etc
  • When she looks up at the trees (point of view), it’s desaturated and has a lack of colour
  • Her face when she is holding it looks like the woman’s/alien’s from the beginning of the movie
  • Smoke going in to the snowy air – lack of colour like the beginning of the movie/going to a better place
  • Fire – stands out?/like she’s been cremated
  • Snow and smoke are only temporary things and it feels ethereal
  • The rapist has dirty clothes
  • The environment is represented as a thing – throughout the film there’s shots of just nature
  • Mise en scene/trees in the foreground partially obscuring Laura – outsider/spying/creepy/vulnerable if you feel someone is watching
  • snowflakes falling down

 

Performance

  • she runs and hides
  • gets in the car (symbol of her old life) but it doesn’t start (symbol that she isn’t who she used to be) – a human thing to run to what should have been comforting
  • he’s forceful and brutal
  • she stumbles slowly
  • peels of skin like clothing
  • face still blinks like the woman still cried
  • The way that she stares at the face shows empathy which contrasts to the beginning
  • Looks at the face like it’s a mirror – see’s what she isn’t/wanted to be
  • He’s chewing gum – gross/emotionless
  • Motorcyclist has lost Laura – because she became so different he doesn’t know how to
  • The way that Laura killed people was less violent (leading them) than the man
  • He walks slowly towards the truck but it’s still threatening
  • Tables have turned – hunter is being hunted
  • Stops fighting – distant/accurate to real life/she feels a sense of inevitability

 

Editing

  • long duration shot of the snow
  • super imposed (?) – tree sleeping image
  • Slow editing/low cutting rate when running away which is unusual for a tense scene but it doesn’t need to tell the audience to feel tense as it’s already scary enough

 

Sound

  • calm music when Laura is sleeping in the trees
  • no music when she is running because it is scary enough already
  • horn – loud – diegetic
  • she makes scared noises – emotion/shows brutality of the man
  • hear running footsteps
  • eerie noise – reversal of previous scenes
  • drumming sound and then also calm-ish sounds when walking on fire
  • Quiet when it’s the smoke and the snow
  • lack of her sound when cornered and on fire – accepted her fate/the scene is scary and tense enough already/music didn’t need to guide us/we don’t know Laura’s thought but we’re still positioned with her/realist/audience can make their own mind up
  • we hear what she hears when she’s asleep
  • diegetic sound fades away when eerie noise comes on

 

Gender

  • Male – predator (both men)/aggressive/violent

 

Ethnicity

  • Scotland, for the alien, stands in for the whole planet
  • Scottish men and woman stand in for all of humanity

 

Context

  • Caspar David Friedrich – painting ‘wanderer above the sea of fog’ – motorcyclist – sublime – ironic reference as motorcyclist doesn’t think it’s beautiful/ blind to all that is good and beautiful

 

 

Narrative

  • Aliens keep failing job/task – power in humans/weakness in them
  • comparing ending to the beginning is important because it’s about Laura’s character arc and it shows the ideologies of the film
  • Binary opposition of male and female
  • Binary opposition of human and alien
  • Film starts with her creation and ends with her death – full circle
  • woman and Laura comparison – circular structure
  • We associate with her by this point and feel empathy/sympathy
  • narrative flip- she was the predator and now she’s the prey
  • narrative flip – men and women
  • alien – human – alien — we feel sympathy for her from human and onwards

 

Ideologies

  • existentialism – what was the point of her existence?
  • Marxist critique – she’s a worker/slave that was exploited (?) and punished/would have been punished for stopping her job
  • Critique of women being object of representation of women

 

Notes

  • Laura was given a false idea that everyone is nice – when she fell on the street
  • we see things as she see’s them
  • feel sympathy unlike her when she was an alien and then she shifts back into her alien form but we still feel sympathy for her
  • she has become relatable as she acts more human and feels more like a human does

 

 

 

 

Under The Skin Middle Notes

 

Cinematography

  • extreme close up of her eye
  • face close up in the fog – high key low contrast – lost herself
  • close up during the cross fade of Laura
  • Light shines on the mirror – back lit and low key. You see her silhouette and obscured face  then she steps closer to the mirror and her face lights up – moving into the light/finding herself/change in identity/analysing herself/comparing herself to the man

 

Mise en Scene

  • See the alien form
  • Laura is facing the other way to the alien in the cross fade suggesting her change of direction/path in life
  • Clothes on the floor
  • Fly on the window – point of view shot – flies individualistic unlike the ant at the beginning, she’s evolving from what she was/she compares the fly to Adam’s character and how he’s trapped somewhere he doesn’t want to be/representation of her trying o get out and wanting to be free. Feels empathy for people who are vulnerable now.
  • See the cyclists face
  • Mist wave – lighter and more colourful than the nature in the opening suggesting her change of heart/contrasts to the drowning scene as the wave isn’t an actual wave symbolising no one else will get hurt/the shot looks stunning/sublime (red/brown grass etc)
  • Light spark in her eye – the door/window and could represent her change of heart (‘eyes are the window to the soul’)
  • The camera remains in the van after she has left and walked/ran out of shot – she’s left her position and her old ways/life
  • Fog – she’s lost literally but could represent morally as well/white suggests  clean slate
  • The man has to walk from what looks like country side back to civilisation (town)

 

Editing

  • Parallel action of Laura, the man and the motorcyclist
  • Cross fade alien to Laura where Laura is looking in a different direction to the alien suggesting she has a changed/new path in life/she has changed her morals/shift in identity etc or maybe she’s looking inside herself or it shows that she is becoming human/she feels she’s becoming humane
  • Editing pace is slowed down during the mirror scene
  • Long duration shot – the mirror

 

Performance

  • Examining her face in the mirror and moves towards mirror – examining her eye/comparing herself to the man/examining who she is as a person and is the pivotal turning point in her character where she begins to feel empathy. Pivotal moment for her identity. Epiphany.
  • The man looks around and speaks – not just interested in having sex with her. He is the person who shows her not all humans just want sex and sparks her change of heart
  • Laura leaving the van shows her leaving her life/her job
  • Laura walks out of shot when she leaves the van – left her position and identity shift (proxemics)
  • Laura runs into the van awkwardly (proxemics)
  • Laura drives fast
  • Laura looks panicked
  • An old woman see’s the motorcyclist put the man in the trunk of a car and he looks at her – she does nothing – shows that not all humans feel humanity
  • Only blinks once during the long duration shot when she’s looking in the mirror
  • Stands very close to the mirror unlike humans normally do
  • The man walks back to civilisation from the country side to the town
  • Motorcyclist is fast and vicious/aggressive/concentrated/emotionless

 

Sound

  • Her Laura’s voice when we see the long shot of the alien (sound bridge?)
  • non-diegetic eerie noise follows her footsteps – ritualistic and builds tension – hunting musics (luring men/rape etc)
  • hear motorcyclist when it’s not seen
  • drumming like eerie sound when motorcyclist is catching the man and eerie noises – heartbeat/anxiety/anger
  • humming sound
  • lack of sound (not silent) during the mirror scene

 

Narrative

  • Binary opposition – dark and light and white and black
  • mirror moment – shift in identity/;pivotal moment. Cross fade is also shows a change in identity
  • Luring scene replays over and over throughout the movie – reinforces it and creates meaning
  • Parallel action – Laura, the man and the motorcyclist

 

 

Ideology

  • Feminism – objectification of Laura is stopped in this scene?

 

 

Context (?)

  • Ricard Wilson’s 20:50 artwork

‘How useful has an ideological critical approach been in understanding binary oppositions in the narratives of your chosen films?’

 

In ‘Moon’ the ideology of capitalism is heavily explored throughout the film. In the opening, the performance and mise en scene of the main character Sam running on a treadmill is a symbol and/or metaphor for him working but getting no where and not benefiting from all the hard-labour work he is doing for Lunar Industries. This has links to capitalism as it shows that not everyone benefits from capitalism, the film takes a Marxist like critique approach to capitalism throughout the film by presenting how Sam as well as others suffer from a capitalist society/company.  The opening montage infomercial for Lunar Industries has upbeat major piano music because the company is trying to portray themselves as good people when in reality the mise en scene of the archive footage contrasts the positive music that made the audience feel good things towards the company and shows the real side to Lunar Industries. The binary opposition of those who have and those who have not is shown in this montage through the ideology of capitalism as the animated sequence shows that the company only view 70 percent of the world as west America (binary opposition of the east and the west) which are who they are going to help despite everyone needing helping showing them as a corrupt company and proving that capitalism doesn’t help everyone. This opening equilibrium when compared to the closing equilibrium shows no change in the world for the better as the people have not changed and capitalism is still negatively affecting the population. This narrative structure presents to the audience the problems with capitalism and could leave them, considering their own society and moral views.

 

Some audience members may interpret a capitalist critique in ’Under the Skin’ as well.  During the opening Laura, the alien, picks up an ant and stares at it. This can be interpreted as her first proper interaction with life on earth, but it could also be interpreted as a symbol for being a worker for someone else as an ant is a worker as well as Laura. The close up of the ant and the high contrast and high key lighting emphasizes the ant’s presence to the audience and therefore also the meaning behind it. It could even be a metonym for Laura, she is a worker as well as a vulnerable live creature which we learn at the end of the film. The binary opposition surrounding this ideology is power and submission; when Laura becomes human/feels empathy (the moment she looks in the mirror is a pivotal turning point, unlike in ‘Moon’ when Sam avoids looking at himself in the mirror prolonging his turning point) she does not want to hurt humans anymore and rebels keeping power for herself against the capitalist like situation she was involved in where she didn’t benefit from what she was doing. The man with a disfigured face was not just interested in having sex with her, he didn’t focus just on her body and instead looked around where he was and commented on the temperature of the room. This was the moment the alien realised not all men where interested in sex, being one of the reasons why she started to feel empathy for humanity. This was also a turning point in the representation of gender in the film as until this point men were shown as being only interested in sex and women, Laura, was constantly being sexually objectified. Laura didn’t submit to the pressure of what her job was, she was being hunted by the motorcyclists that were supposed to ‘keep her in line’ and instead rebelled when she recognised the disequilibrium and didn’t follow what she wasn’t benefiting from and what she didn’t want to do, contrasting to the opening equilibrium when she appeared to do her job without any emotional consideration such as when she drops the woman’s head on the floor or appears predator like in the shopping centre when the high angle over the shoulder shot places her above every other person making them seem vulnerable and like meat (it could even have been from her point of view, it was how she felt towards them). Sadly, for the audience, Laura dies at the cruelty of humanity at the end of the movie which in some ways is ironic as when she starts to show compassion, humanity shows its evil side; she is killed brutality, her skin is broken and then she is set on fire. Some audience members may feel for Laura this was an escape, as she was incredibly isolated due to not fitting in with humans or her own kind anymore.

 

The binary opposition of human and clone in ‘Moon’ is explored through the ideologies of nihilism and existentialism. During the middle sequence the second Sam the audience meets is looking for a hidden room, the jump cuts of him doing so with him always in the centre make it feel hectic and claustrophobic for the audience, highlighting to them that something is wrong. This contrasts to Sam one’s actions/performance who is watching trash television instead of helping. To the audience, Sam appears stupid as he isn’t trying to solve the serious problem that he is in. Nihilism and existentialism are explored through Sam one as an audience member might interpret that he feels as though his life is meaningless now he knows he’s probably a clone and not a human and therefore doesn’t bother helping Sam two. This changes later on in the film during the attempt to repair the disequilibrium/ending equilibrium when Sam one’s purpose is to save the second Sam before the narrative device of the Eliza countdown finishes.

 

The binary opposition of human and alien is one way that the ideology of existentialism is explored in ‘Under the Skin’. Laura after her pivotal turning point and now feeling compassion and empathy no longer wants to harm humans and instead tries to act like one. For example, she attempts to eat cake, an activity most humans take pleasure in, yet she cannot. She spits the food out showing that she isn’t human as not only would humans have enjoyed it, but food is fundamental to their survival therefore setting her apart form humans. This means Laura is incredibly isolated as she doesn’t fit in with humans or with her own kind anymore, this link to the ideology of existentialism as she may start to feel worthless due to her lack of belonging. Sleep became her only escape from this isolation, the extreme long shot of the forest where Laura fades into the frame when sleeping is a metaphorical shot to show her calmness and freedom in sleep which contrasts to her scary and trapped life when awake where she is being hunted down by the motorcyclist can can’t fit in as much as she tries. She even dies not understanding humans in the closing equilibrium meaning the comparison of the opening and closing equilibrium shows both a gigantic change in her personality and no change at all, as she feels empathy and is a different person than he used to be meaning she now doesn’t fit in anywhere and may feel meaningless and isolated (existentialism), yet she still doesn’t understand humans.

 

In the opening on ‘Moon’ the ideology of environmentalism helps set up the binary opposition of human and machinery as well as setting up the narrative plot for the rest of the film. The opening montage infomercial for Lunar Industries that uses archive footage presents Lunar Industries as an environmentalist company as they show images of factories causing pollution as well as humans ignoring the problem on the beach with the factory behind them (human and machine) then contrast these images with ones that make the audience feel hopeful such as the greening deserts and saying that that’s what the company is trying to achieve and will achieve. This contextually links to the audiences lives as the film came out in 2009 meaning that environmental problems such as global warming were very relevant in their lives not just the film and it’s still relevant for watchers today. The binary opposition of human and machine is explored through those ignoring the problem on the beach with the long shot of people relaxing with a polluting factory in the background, this may make audience members consider their own lives and if they ignore environmental problems too. It also sets up Lunar Industries as a good environmentalist company until we learn that they just plan on swapping one finite resource with another. The animated sequence shows how they plan on using the moon which is a finite resource (it also explain the narrative plot and why Sam is on the moon), suggesting they’re not as environmentalist as they claim a well as suggesting the ideology of modernism can’t be applied to the company despite them trying to portray so with their block colours in their simply designed logo, as solving the environmental problems was not as simple or logical as they suggested through the infomercial, there is not a straightforward logical solution meaning modernism cannot be applied to the company or their environmental plans. The binary opposition of human and machine may also be applied to this ideology as audience members may interpret humans as the problem and what is preventing modernism/a logical way for environmental problems to be solved. This is proven in the ending equilibrium when compared to the opening equilibrium because despite Sam two telling the world what Lunar Industries had done, they still just called him an ‘illegal immigrant’ through the voice over suggesting no good change would come as the humans had not changed themselves.

 

In ‘Under The Skin’ exploring the binary opposition of men and women through the ideology of feminism the way that the roles and representation change throughout the movie becomes more apparent. Laura, the alien, can be viewed as objectified due her main role in the film being her luring men in with her body; and as she doesn’t have many lines, an audience member may feel that her body is being used and objectified instead of using her words/because she doesn’t really speak if they are thinking about it from a feminist perspective. Until the acknowledgment of the disequilibrium, the female (Laura) is the one with power. The high angle shot of her when in the shopping center makes her seem predator like and above everyone else who appear like herd in the background. Plus, the way she leads men into the black void which looks like Richard Wilson’s 20:50 is emotionless, and she’s in control when it happens. At this point the representation of women is objectifying but also suggests that women are powerful. The film represents men as only wanting sex as the men follow Laura without question; the motorcyclist also represents men as power and brutal such as when he picked up the unconscious woman. There is a narrative flip when it comes to the binary opposition of men and women. After Laura has decided she doesn’t want to hurt men anymore, she meets a man at the bus station who takes her to a castle. During this scene, the man is encouraging Laura to descend some steps but she appears scared. This is because the roles have flipped, the proxemics are the opposite to what they were before. He is in front of her and trying to encourage her to follow him, she fears that it is a trap because he takes the role that she used to when she killed people. At the end of the movie, the men are still brutal, the log man brutally attacks her and the performance of him chewing gum makes him seem emotionless while doing so. This brutality contrasts to her earlier in the film when she led men into the black abyss making it seem more passive as she didn’t violently attack them like the log man did to her when he attempted to rape her and sets her on fire .

Under The Skin – Research

 

https://franklycurious.com/wp/2017/01/30/under-the-skin/

 

  • When she goes to the castle, they have to descend some stairs. Laura is scared and the man help her. But the proxemics are the complete reversal of before when she trapped the men. He’s in front of her and encouraging her to follow him. Laura fears that it is a trap.
  • Laura is lonely as she doesn’t fit in with humans as well as not fitting in with her own kind and being unhappy in following what her own kind wants her to do

Under The Skin – Shopping Centre

 

Cinematography

  • Over the shoulder, high angle shot with Laura in the centre – places her above the others which makes her seem superior and predator like, it could also be how she see’s herself. The people in the background aren’t as relevant – like a herd

 

Mise en scene

  • Fur coat – predator
  • She’s alone contrasting to the majority of others
  • Clothes –  the clothes are bold and picking out clothes is a very human thing for her to be doing. It can be interpreted as her adapting to being on earth or her purposefully wearing sexually provocative clothing

 

Performance

  • Women getting make up done – society standards?

 

 

Editing

  • Montage and fragmentation – when picking the clothes which makes it seem as though Laura knows what clothes she wants already
  • Montage of others – the camera shows the aliens view of the world and learns from others

 

Sound

  • The alien is quiet which contrasts to everyone else being very loud (diegetic/murmuring/indistinct) which makes Laura seem emotionless and isolated

 

 

Gender

  • Critique of cinema’s emphasis on attractiveness- The alien doesn’t say much but is attractive (objectifying women takes away their voice – Julia Kristeva) and the audience could interpret that if Laura wasn’t attractive, there’s a chance that she would have been treated differently. When Laura does speak, it’s often to lure men.

 

 

Notes

  • The man with a disfigured face causes her realisation of humanity as he’s the first men that she meets that doesn’t just want sex.
  • Laura has a role/job and gets punished when she stops

Moon and Under The Skin Opening Comparisons

 

Representation 

In the opening sequence of ‘Moon’, Sam an adult male is shown as the labour worker for Lunar Industries, the film then goes on to represent women as a kind of prize/reward for the man while he does all the hard work. In the opening of ‘Under The Skin’ the man (the motorcyclist) is shown as emotionless and focused. He captures the woman (or alien?) without any sense of caring, this contrasts to the woman who cries which is showing emotion. The alien, Laura, is also shown to be emotionless. She drops the woman head on the ground and pays for attention to the ant when the audience is concerned for the paralysed woman.

 

Narrative Structure 

In the opening equilibrium of ‘Moon’ the audience learns allot about Lunar Industries and why Sam is working on the moon for them. It also sets up binary oppositions such as the west and east and ideologies like capitalism in the infomercial montage. It sets up the rest of the movie as well as showing the audience that Lunar Industries are corrupt and cannot be trusted which helps the rest of the movie to work. On the other hand, the messages that the opening equilibrium in ‘Under The Skin’ gives the audience are more subtle than those in ‘Moon’, and when it’s the first time watching the audience will probably be left confused. The jarring changes of shot length and lighting from low key to high key set the tone for the rest of the movie and make the audience feel like an outsider just like Laura, the alien, does. With close up images it shows an eye being made, and the sound of what sounds like Laura learning to speak with phonics suggests the process of Laura becoming her human form. Unlike the ending of ‘Moon’ the ending in ‘Under The Skin’ is different to the beginning as Laura has become more human and has empathy which contrasts to her at the start. However, in both equilibrium’s she doesn’t understand humans and still cannot entirely be one.

 

Visually, these two images look similar:

Moon – Opening

Under The Skin – Opening

The exploded projection from ‘Under The Skin’ has a planetary feel but can be interpreted as an eye being made. Similarly,  the animated sequence in the opening of ‘Moon’ is of space and in some ways looks similar to the exploded projection in ‘Under The Skin’. Both tell the audience information as the exploded projection gives the idea that Laura is other worldly and the animated sequence shows the corruptness of Lunar Industries when they only represent West America.

Under The Skin Opening Notes

Most of the opening is jarring, possibly to make the audience feel like an outsider just like Laura and to make us question what’s happening.

Mise en Scene

  • blue cold light – entering another existence/eye being made
  • exploded projection with a planetary feel or an eye being made
  • black eye (no soul) being formed/squashed in (‘eyes are the window of the soul’)
  • road and river seen near/next to another and presented like they were the same
  • woman still alive
  • white background suggests the woman is a ‘failed’ alien. Cycle is ended at the end of the film.
  • Woman’s face look’s like Laura’s at the end of the movie
  • Don’t know where they are but it doesn’t matter
  • Costume design
  • woman looks like Laura
  • Ant ECU – vicious look but is fragile which contrasts to Laura
  • Space craft and lights
  • In a dirty and run down house (looks abandoned)
  • City life against country life (like at the end of the film)
  • Scotland represented as cold/wet etc

 

Cinematography

  • CU of blue light
  • Use of black and white – woman is suggested as an alien that has become more human because it’s a white background not black like Laura’s void
  • ECU of eye makes it seem alien like because it’s disturbing/uncomfortable
  • ELS or LS of alien when picking up the ant
  • high key and high contrast (ant etc)
  • high key white background makes dark figure (cold/empty/emotionless)
  • extreme low key to high key is jarring, it challenges the viewer. It makes you unsettled at question what you’re watching

 

 

Performance

  • motorbike man doesn’t speak and quickly and easily finds the woman (unnerving/ emotionless/focused)
  • Aliens morality is off as she seems to be more interested in the ant when the audience is concerned for the human
  • The woman cries (alive/paralysed/emotion)
  • Alien is emotionless when undressing her and drops her head down (focused/emotionless)
  • begins to explore the world when she sees the ant

 

 

Editing

  • Graphic match/match cut of circle to eye being made

 

 

Sound

  • Speaking noises – learning how to speak?
  • hard to listen to non-diegetic noises that are fast paced, like it’s building something and mechanical and inhuman which is jarring
  • close sonic perspective of the woman when clothes are being removed (muffled) which is uncomfortably intimate and could be from the woman’s perspective

 

Representation

Gender

  • Female – Alien showed as having no emotion but the woman (who might be an alien as well) is shown to have emotion
  • Male – shown as emotionless

Ethnicity

  • Alien that takes a human form

 

 

Narrative

  • Binary oppositions: city/country, city/nature, human/alien
  • jarring cinematography/sound etc to confuse and un-nerve the viewer to make the audience feel like an outsider for the rest of the film

 

Ideology

  • Ant and alien are workers. Exploited worker (woman). (Karl’s belief that workers will revolt against the industry?)
  • Positioned with alien and briefly with the woman. Originally positioned with no one?
  • Identity – woman looks like Laura

 

 

Note

  • because Laura exhibits coldness and doesn’t show empathy for the woman, we don’t feel empathy or sympathy for her but this changes as the movies continues

Draft 1 of Script

 

  1. INT. DAY.

 

The clock near the ceiling is shown before NADINE walks into the kitchen. NADINE see’s the knife on the edge of the centre kitchen counter and stops walking.

 

2) NIGHT. RED LIGHTING (if possible)

 

NADINE is holding the knife in the corridor. (Not literally, it’s in her head).

 

3) INT. DAY.

 

NADINE is still in the same place in the kitchen as before.

 

NADINE V/O

MUM could easily hurt herself, it’s too close to the edge. Just move it.

 

NADINE walks slowly over but doesn’t get there yet.

 

4) NIGHT. RED LIGHTING (if possible)

 

NADINE is holding the knife by her side in the corridor like before. She starts to walk into the living room.

 

NADINE V/O

Stop it

 

The room fades for a second before being clear again. NADINE continues to walk.

 

 

NADINE V/0

(elongated) stop. Please stop, stop

 

The room fades for a second before getting clear again while NADINE walks faster. She raises the knife, there’s screams but we see nothing as the screams come from around the corner.

 

 

5) INT. DAY.

 

NADINE is in the kitchen still and she is now leaning on the side kitchen counter.

 

NADINE

(annoyed and upset) Stop for god’s sake stop it stop

 

 

NADINE V/O

I still need to move the knife

 

 

She walks slowly towards the knife and stops briefly while doing so before moving the knife to the centre of the counter. She takes a deep breath out.

 

NADINE walks over to the sink where she washes her hands twice and shakes them dry four times. After her hands are dry, she gets kitchen roll to cover her hands as she begins to make cereal.

 

NADINE has finished making the cereal and places it on the side counter. NADINE then examines multiple spoons before picking one to use.

 

 

6) INT. DAY.

 

NADINE walks into the living room and sits down on the sofa. She taps her spoon four times on the edge of her bowl before eating and uses TV remotes covered in tissue to turn on the TV which plays quietly in the background.

 

 

MUM

Morning sweetheart

NADINE

Morning

 

NADINE smiles at her MUM.

 

MUM

Are you alright?

NADINE

I’m alright thanks, you?

MUM

I’m fine thanks

 

The MUM leaves the room.

 

 

 

7) INT. DAY.

 

NADINE finishes getting changed before heading to the front door with her bag ready to leave.

 

MUM

You’re leaving already?

NADINE

Yeah, but I’ll be home around 3, see you later

MUM

Bye darling

The MUM goes to hug NADINE who instead of hugging back gives a thumbs up and leaves. The MUM who appears sad pauses before walking into her room and shutting her door.

 

 

 

 

 

Attempt 2 At Mock Questions

Moon

 

1 (a).     Examine how one example of editing creates meaning in the film you have studied.

[10 marks]

(15 minutes)

 

In the opening of ‘Moon’ directed by Duncan Jones editing is used to set up the narrative and the ideologies of the film. The film opens with a montage sequence that is an infomercial for the people in the film. The infomercial is for Lunar Industries. During this montage sequence the audience is shown lots of archive footage of how the environment needs help, for example, there are long shots of factories causing pollution. Lunar Industries uses this infomercial to present themselves as environmentalists, they want and are helping the environment by using resources on the moon which the audience is shown with an animated sequence of space and the moon during the infomercial. They use contrasting mise en scene, one image is of people ignoring the problems the world is having on the beach while factories are behind them which sets up the binary opposition of humans and machine but they contrast this mise en scene with shots of things like greening deserts which aesthetically makes the audience feel happy especially after previous negative images to try and present themselves as a good company with good intentions. This initial representation of them as a company means the audience likes them as the film was made in 2009 and so environmental problems would have been very real in the audiences on lives and seeing their problems being fixed by Lunar Industries would probably make the audience like them.

However, the opening montage sequence isn’t all good, and by the end of it the audience would know that Lunar Industries cannot be trusted. Although their logo suggests reference to modernism, that there is a simple and logical answer to everything, because of the symbolism of using the moon and the block colours, this turns out to not be the case. Most audience members know that they are actually just replacing one finite resource with another, suggesting that Lunar Industries aren’t environmentalists at all. Plus, the next montage sequence is of adult male Sam who is running on a treadmill which is a metaphor for him not going anywhere, he is stuck with Lunar Industries. This has links to capitalism and how it doesn’t benefit everyone such as it’s workers, Sam is used as a labourer his entire life with the intention of being killed straight after and works in a dirty environment that contrasts to the pristine and white environment that we were originally shown. Meaning that a Marxist criticism of capitalism is probably being explored as Sam is suffering because of capitalism. Using a man as the labourer has links to the films representation of gender, the film mainly consists of men, the women are seen as prizes for Sam to return home to while Sam does all of the work.

 

 

1 (b). Examine how one example of mise en scene creates meaning in the film you have studied.

[10 marks]

(17 minutes)

 

In the opening sequence of Duncan Jones’ ‘Moon’ the opening sequence is the only saturated and colourful part of the film. The montage infomercial tries to present Lunar Industries in a good way, one way that the reality of Lunar Industries contrasts with its representation of itself in this sequence is the change of saturation and colour. Instead of being colourful which has the connotations of happiness the space station is desaturated and monochrome colours which aesthetically makes the reader feel sadder and also helps set up the narrative of Lunar Industries not being a morally correct company, especially since the space station itself is dirty, as well as Sam’s space suit. Sam, an adult male, has even written the four Apostles names on parts of the space equipment/stations. This shows the audience that Lunar Industries are not as good as they try and seem as they don’t give their workers very nice working conditions which has links to capitalism and how it doesn’t benefit everyone. It also shows the audience that Lunar Industries are untrustworthy, which helps set up the rest of the film where Lunar Industries is discovered to use and exploit clones.

 

Lunar Industries is also shown as corrupt during the animated sequence of the montage infomercial. The voice over makes it clear to the audience that the company can only help 70 percent of the world, they show this as West America on the globe as that’s the part of the world that is lit up. This starts the binary opposition of the West and the East and makes the company seem corrupt as they are only helping a specific area of the globe after showing lots of archive footage which suggested they would help a lot more people than West America, the mise en scene during the infomercial showed everything form people ignoring the problem at the beach to long shots of the factories causing the pollution to children sorting through rubbish. The audience may now feel that Lunar Industries isn’t going to help these children, meaning that the representation of age could be that Lunar Industries used children just to cause empathy and therefore be a liked company who is viewed to have good intentions despite not actually having them.

Coursework Stuff

 

Narrative and visual/audio influences for your work

I would like the audience to understand what is going on without having to use too much narration and/or dialogue for them to know what’s happening, I’ll use some but also use things like colours, what they can actually see and lots of sound editing to get across meaning. I want to use lots of sound editing (mainly non-diegetic) as well as coloured lighting if I can. I’m hoping I can make the sounds with objects around the home and stay away from music as much as possible. Influences are the films/short films that I researched about such as the short films I found on YouTube. ( Coursework Research ) I want my film to be an opening sequence that sets up the film as not just about someone living with ocd but how it effects relationships and other people such as family. I want the character to be doing something extraordinarily normal when ocd is effecting them to try and keep it as real as possible and to show that they’re still a regular person.

 

Production’s genre, style and intended audience

I’m not sure what the genre is, but the intended audience is teenagers and older. I want to use as little dialogue and narration to explain what is going on as possible but using some is inevitable. If I am able to, I want to use colour to help get across meaning as well as lots of non-diegetic sound, but I am unaware of what I am capable of doing. I think I am going to use the title of the movie to help it make sense, by putting ‘ocd’ in the title, it doesn’t have to be explicitly said and it will help explain what’s happening.  I’d like to not have too many cuts and instead have takes that last a bit longer as that is what I really enjoy in films, some cuts and close ups will be necessary but when I can I will try and make longer takes.